The First One to Speak Loses

Epigraph is from one of my favorite books.

What we, or at any rate what I, refer to confidently as memory—meaning a moment, a scene, a fact that has been subjected to a fixative and thereby rescued from oblivion—is really a form of storytelling that goes on continually in the mind and often changes with the telling. Too many conflicting emotional interests are involved for life ever to be wholly acceptable, and possibly it is the work of the storyteller to rearrange things so that they conform to this end. In any case, in talking about the past we lie with every breath we draw.

—William Maxwell, So Long, See You Tomorrow

Monday, July 8, 2013

Day 7: July 8 2013

Day 7 = half way. Time is going way too fast. Just starting to get a rhythm and routine going. Finished reading the entire manuscript today. Did you know writers are architects too? I've now drawn the structure of this novel. With the help of Robert J. Ray's The Novelist Re-Writes the Novel I've plotted the 3-act structure, identified Plot Points I and II, the Midpoint, the Climax, and of course THE END. It may sound easy, but seriously it's not. Especially since this is the first time I've examined the draft as a unified narrative. This is arduous work. In addition, I've traced every object throughout the novel and noted recurrences. Why do this you ask? Because it lays the foundation for the REWRITE. Yes, I have a 133 page draft, but to rewrite is more than fixing grammar or changing a word here and there; it's "fixing the subplots," which involves several characters' core stories and how they collide with the protagonist and the plot. Now I have a blueprint, a complete arc from which to revise. So tomorrow the fun stuff begins . . . This may look like scribbles, but it's my map to the buried treasure.



So this evening I drove to the library. Temecula's library is the jewel in the crown among all the Inland Empire's libraries. It's open every night and I must say it's a good sign when you can't get a parking spot at the library.





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